Nowadays, people are spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

It is true that people are staying at

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for long hours and

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may sometimes be even longer than the

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they stay at

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.

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might be a disadvantage for some people, especially for those who have families waiting at

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, while it might be the opposite for people who live alone.

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essay will try to compare

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both the negative and

positive sides of it.

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with, for children whose parents spend too much

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at

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rather than at

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, it might be disappointing. To illustrate, there are many studies supporting that children should have quality

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with their parents to increase their intellectual capacity in the future. Because it is suggested that the most of people’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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are gained from their parents.

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, parents would need more to stay at

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and support their children’s development.

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, people who live alone might enjoy being at

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rather than at

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. As it is a well-known evolutionary fact, people tend to have social networks to protect themselves from outside danger. In modern societies, social connections are observed as a way to avoid having mental illnesses.

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is a strong reason why people shouldn’t stay at

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for long hours, because it may result in unwanted consequences

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as boredom which may trigger depressive thoughts.

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, spending longer at

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may minimize the detrimental effects of being alone for too long and would be helpful to interact more with others. In conclusion, the vast majority of people are working for long hours today, which causes having less

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to spend at

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. I believe

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is sometimes an advantage for people living alone and need to socialize more whereas a disadvantage for people who need to be with their children at their homes.