Some people believe that team sports is very important for children to succeed in their career, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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chart shows the relation between the rate of British people donating part of their money for charity and the historical period when these donations were made.
There is a substantial increase in the percentage of donators along with an increasing donator Linking Words
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trend is typical for both 1990 and 2010. Linking Words
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, the absolute amount of people giving money to charity has always been higher in 1990 than in 2010, considering just the Linking Words
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. While concerning the fourth and fifth ranges the situation was inverted. In fact, we can see that the percentage of donators iUse synonyms
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age
and in 1990 people were more likely to give money to charity than they were in 2010.
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Finally
, it is important to stress that the two peaks of the donators percentage marked by Linking Words
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, reached by people in 1990 and 2010, are different. In fact, for the 1990 people the range of Use synonyms
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that reached the peak was the one who went from 36 to 50, while the one for 2010 people was the one who went from 51 to 65.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite