Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students' attidutes are important . Discuss both views and give your opinions .

It is often said that flourishing education systems, which are brought up knowledgeable and innovative personnels are involved with the role of good teachers while some opine that it is

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a crucial mind-set

of students. In my view, the position of adequate teachers

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dominates

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essay. As they play

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an important role

the important role

of students'

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developer

. A good teacher should be aware of psychological knowledge. Because in

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, there are individual students according to their personalities and interests. As long as they can influentially draw students' attention

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any boring

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will turn into

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an interesting one

interesting ones

. One way would be beneficial for developing of educational success which teachers are able to think up inventing new methods.

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different methods and activates that demanding for participation of students might be much more effective

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they can be easily obsessed with the process of

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the class

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, teachers should not be so authoritarian, it might as well reduce

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interest

and participation of pupils. On the one hand,

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however, do

good teachers struggle to inspire their students, unless they have a sense of

enthuasiasm

a feeling of excitement

enthusiasm

and responsibilities for themselves, it will not probably bring about improving

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the conditions

of education systems.

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, they more tend to get

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distracted, which

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as surfing the net or reading another book. In conclusion, it is considered to be essential to have roles of both a good teachers and students.

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, teachers are humans like

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others, they

cannot give the whole information to the students in one

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Thus students

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Thus, students

should more take on responsibility to ameliorate teaching progress rather than rely on teachers

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