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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students' attidutes are important . Discuss both views and give your opinions .

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It is often said that flourishing education systems, which are brought up knowledgeable and innovative personnels are involved with the role of good teachers while some opine that it is
crucial mind-set
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a crucial mind-set
 of students. In my view, the position of adequate teachers
dominate
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dominates
 in
this
 essay. As they play
important role
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an important role
the important role
 of students'
developments
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developer
. A good teacher should be aware of psychological knowledge. Because in
class
, there are individual students according to their personalities and interests. As long as they can influentially draw students' attention
,
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,
 any boring
class
 will turn into
interesting one
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an interesting one
interesting ones
. One way would be beneficial for developing of educational success which teachers are able to think up inventing new methods.
For
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Four
 different methods and activates that demanding for participation of students might be much more effective
,
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,
 they can be easily obsessed with the process of
class
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the class
.
In addition
 to
this
, teachers should not be so authoritarian, it might as well reduce
interests
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interest
 and participation of pupils. On the one hand,
however do
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however, do
 good teachers struggle to inspire their students, unless they have a sense of
enthuasiasm
a feeling of excitement
enthusiasm
 and responsibilities for themselves, it will not probably bring about improving
conditions
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the conditions
 of education systems.
Besides
, they more tend to get
distracted which
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distracted, which
 is peripheral factors
such
 as surfing the net or reading another book. In conclusion, it is considered to be essential to have roles of both a good teachers and students.
Nevertheless
, teachers are humans like
others they
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others, they
 cannot give the whole information to the students in one
class
.
Thus students
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Thus, students
 should more take on responsibility to ameliorate teaching progress rather than rely on teachers
.
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.
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