The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the

population

Japan

in various

years

between 1950 to 2055.

In addition

to the line

graph

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,graph

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there is a statistical comparison of

aging

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ageing

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people

above 65

years

. As per data, the

population

count

recorded

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is recorded

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for

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apply

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every 5

years

, starting from 1950 and predicted till the

future

year

2055. In 1950

Japan

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Japan's

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population

was 84.1

million

. From 1950

population

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the population

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grows 4-5

million

for

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apply

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every 5

years

till 1970. In 1975 there is significant growth and ended in 111.9

million

. After 1970 there is gradual growth till

present

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the present

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year

Japan

also

predicated

population

for

future

years

according to

the data the

population

will fall to 89.9

million

in the

year

2055.

On the other hand

, there were records for age

people

above 65

years

. In

year

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the year

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1950, 4.1

million

senior citizens with a percentage of 4.9%. In 2005 it grows

till

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20% by 25.7

million

people

. As per

future

data, it will grow up to 41% aged

people

over 65

years

with 36.5

million

. In conclusion,

Japan

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Japan's

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total

population

will fall in

future

years

whereas

aged

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the aged

show examples

people

population

will be increased.

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