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In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

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Not enough rubbish is recycled around the world today. In my opinion,
this
 is probably because people are not aware of the benefits of recycling or do not have available recycling facilities. To solve these problems, the government could develop programs to raise awareness among communities as well as creating rubbish sorting and collecting systems. People do not realize the importance of reusing waste, or do not have an opportunity to do so.
This
 can be solved by educating people and generating effective rubbish collection. In conclusion, recycling is an important tool in reducing waste and sourcing different kinds of material. People need to be educated about its usefulness and have the opportunity to put it
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Suggestion
into
 practice.

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