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As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

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The development of the country brings a lot of facilities for all individuals.Now are days cars are on its top most lists.
although
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Although
 it has some advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly i
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Firstly, I
Firstly I
 am going to discuss about the advantages of vehicle.As compared to the previous century people are showing more interest toward outdoor curricular activities, like family tour by road which is mostly on
auto
 ride.
Other wise it's
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Otherwise, it's
Otherwise it's
 not easy to afford a taxi in very extreme prices when you have a limited budget.
although
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Although
 it
also
 could save the money of van by giving pick and drop to your family.Meanwhile, they use their
auto
 for a business purpose, like giving to companies or serve by oneself as a rental
auto
 and earn on a good basis. On other hand, there is some disadvantages of buying
a
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an
auto
,
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,
as it is going to become our environment polluted by lot of smoke
,
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,
and heavy traffic made people aggressive by using slang language when they stuck in traffic the
auto
 make us lazy it destroy our daily activity like on regular basis most of the people used to go to walk for park or on streets which is helpful for our daily curricular activities and helpful for maintaining health, as walking maintain our mental health and if we have a partner during walk, and we communicate with them by face to face conversation. But now a days its very easy to buy
a
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an
auto
 by taking loan so most of the people happy to avail that benefit and no one think about the environment as they use to do outside chores by going in a car with close the window glass and taken the benefit of air condition. In the end, we enlighten the fact that
car
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the car
a car
 is becoming our daily need so we avoid to use it unnecessarily.

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