In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others.

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It is argued that, via the

internet

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people can work, do shop and

also

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communicate with people. It is

also

Linking Words

can help people. I am of the opinion that

refers to the speaker or writer

totally agree with

this

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statement due to some

below reasons

Suggestion

reasons below

. Advocating of that fact that nowadays many workers do their work with the

internet

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sites.

This

Linking Words

is very

convinent

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

convenient

and useful service for working. There are many reasons. The

first

Linking Words

reason is workers can save their more times with the internets. If they use

internet

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applications, they should not

to go their work

Suggestion

go to their work

place.

For

Linking Words

example salesmen

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example, salesmen

can advertise own products with some channels or

web sites

a computer connected to the internet that maintains a series of web pages on the World Wide Web

websites

. More salesmen can sell the goods.

Also

Linking Words

more people

likes

Suggestion

to buy some things from the shops. They can buy via the

internet

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shops. They can buy via the

internet

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shops and they save the amount of time spent

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

shops. It is

also

Linking Words

good way

Suggestion

a good way

to keep their time.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, from the some sites people may connect to other people. They will make

friends which

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friends, which

never be face-to-face

Suggestion

with

real life.

For instance

Linking Words

, Facebook, telegrams or with Instagram people can find more friends around the world. Some of them will be your compatriot or others will be the from

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

country,

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

culture. You can connect

Suggestion

with

different cultures, and people can expand their relationship. During the communicate other cultures pupil, you can take many information about more things. In a nutshell, working, buying, selling or connecting to other people via the

internet

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it is the best way to save your time and make more friends around the world.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

267 words

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In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others.

Include an introduction and conclusion

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say the Olympic games are not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?