Nowadays people are affected by social media and the internet. Is it a good or a bad trend in your opinion?Explain it by giving your own example.

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Any website of social media allows social interaction

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with

people. Social media is rapidly throughout the world—social media and internet impacts on people's life. Social media and the Internet

keeps

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keep

connected people's with their friends and family members and makes happy by sharing thoughts. To start with social media network

such

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as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, Whatsapp. Using these social media sites

connect

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connects

with people of their location, nationality and background which eventually helps us to make good friends with a valid profile.

Moreover

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, the Internet

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provides us with positive impacts on learning and share our thoughts with people. Internet keeps ourselves to update the latest happenings and share with us before it's come on television or news. Social media and the Internet

helps

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help

us to create a business and connect new people to join our company through advertisement.

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, nowadays, some drawbacks of social media and the Internet. Hacking is one of a serious matter for us.Hackers are

misused

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misusing

our data using any social media account.

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, youngsters make any friends without identifying

someone

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someone's

someones

profile or background only based on a few chats or calls. Afterwards, it will cause our lifestyle and getting hampered with a lot of problems

such

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as financial or misleading by someone. All Social media sites

provides

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provide

us security and privacy settings to secure our personal data and it is always

keeps

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kept

connected with latest news

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events around the globe. In conclusion,

Internet

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the Internet

and social media made our life easy. It

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has positive and negative impacts, but it depends on

kept

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keeping

thoughts positively or negatively.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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260 words

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Nowadays people are affected by social media and the internet. Is it a good or a bad trend in your opinion?Explain it by giving your own example.

Your opinion

To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that GM foods are not only unhealthy but affect nature too. Do you agree or disagree about this?

In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

In some place old age is value, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.