in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry

Around the world the
agriculture
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agricultural
development, the
last
years, was rapidly increased.
However
, as many countries benefit of
this
develop
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developer
, other countries like Africa have a serious
problem
about
hunger
.
This
problem
can be solved if all the developed countries help with many possible ways. The
problem
about
hunger
it happens for several reasons.
First
of all, developing countries like Zimbabwe or Nigeria have to face the political instability which happens because of the bad economy and for
this
the president has changed for many times in the
last
5 years, so people are neglected and they don’t have someone there for them.
Moreover
, they do not have all countries access to
first
need goods like water or food. Especially poor countries like Kenya and Ethiopia, that they don’t have money to create an easy way to find water resources
its
the thing named or in question
it
really difficult for them. About the
hunger
problem
there are many things that developed countries can do to help the developing countries.
Initially
, they can do humanitarian funding to give to them the opportunity to develop their countries starting with the most important, agriculture.
In addition
, they can hinder the
malnourishment
problem
to the poor nations, by subsidise farming to these countries by
help
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helping
their people to improve their skills to the agriculture and so be more capable to
develop
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developing
their countries. To conclude,
nowadays
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the nowadays hunger problem
hunger
problem
is one of the most significant
problem
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problems
that concern all of us. In my opinion its necessary our countries with a lot of resources to contribute to help these countries
for
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in
solved
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solving
this
serious
problem
.

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