Some people who failed at school can be highly successful in their adult life.Discuss why does this happen? And what are the main factors to get a successful life?

It is often seen that some students who are not brilliant in
school
but become very successful in their adult
life
. In
this
essay, I shall delve into the reasons for
this
happening and put forward some of the factors responsible for a successful
life
. To set the wheels in motion, there are numerous reasons for having a successful adult
life
.One of them is that, at
school
time, more emphasis is on the theoretical studies rather than on practical skills.Students who are good
in
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at
practical skills may get low marks in
school
time
,
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,
however
, when they actually get environment for showing their practical skills, they impressed everyone.
Moreover
,
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,
students who are good in sports has less interest in studies which results in getting low grades,
however
,
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,
when they get the platform to showcase their skills, they become
eveyone's
favourite.
For instance
, everyone knows about Sachin Tendulkar, he got failed in board exams, but he is a very successful sportsman. There could be a number of factors responsible for a successful growth. One of the major factors is
the hard
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the hardest
work in
life
to get the desired output.Like, if a person is good in sports, so he should put more efforts to improve their skills and excel in them.
Moreover
, motivation and awareness are the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
main factors.
For example
, a person would be highly motivated and confident if he knows about the market trend and putting the efforts in that area make him successful in their career. To conclude, there are many reasons why students who fail at
school
succeed in adult
life
.But, without
hardwork
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hard work
and struggle, it is very difficult to get successful
life
. One has to go through the procedures and competitions to be successful in their lives.

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