It is important for children to learn the different between right and wrong at early age .Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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Childhood is a proper time to teach how to distinguish between good and bad. Despite the fact that there are some types of
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that parents or teachers are allowed to use in the process, I must oppose the need for
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is right or wrong.
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can reinforce and eventually stabilize the right
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, and weaken and eventually eliminate the
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's inappropriate
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and the
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would be trained without direct implementing
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or encouragement. In
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way, the concern about the negative impact of
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or improper encouragement
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would disappear. Parents and teachers ensure proper training as a
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's role model if they are well coordinated and interact with each other. Good reactionary
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by parents and teachers can develop the ability to distinguish between good and bad, free from
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and encouragement that would ensure proper
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upbringing. Parents and teachers are permitted to use a particular type of
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merely to facilitate the process of recognizing the good
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behavior
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of children by depriving the
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of some of the facilities previously provided. The severity of the
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should be commensurate with the
misbehavior
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
the
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has committed and the reason for the
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and the limited time it has taken, as well as the correct substitution
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behavior
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must be well understood by the
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. Deprivation can be,
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, getting out of a toy, not eating ice cream or not watching a sports competition.
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is when the
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wants to do something
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now deprived of it, would remember the inappropriate
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behavior
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and its sequels and would try to modify it in order to get it back. And in the future, when deciding to do something, the
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would try to behave in a way that does not lead to
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punishment
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. So temporary deprivation as an authorized
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can be a tool to help parents and teachers teach children proper
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behavior
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. In conclusion, to me like many other people, a
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is not a criminal, and in most cases his
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is merely to gain a new experience
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Since
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has permanent effects on a
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's mind, it should only be used when it is the
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and the only choice to teach something to a
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