In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

In many parts of the

world people

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world, people

are engaged in lots of paid

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and these people not only include

adults but

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adults, but

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children at the

age

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of 10-15 years and some are even below the

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of 10 years

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. The

work

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allocated to them could be of many types including labour, acting, tutoring and various other

type

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types

of

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. There is a particular

age

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for people to get into some paid

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from where they become more matured and responsible. Children at

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a low

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will not be able to understand the meaning of

work

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rather they would just indulge in

money

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that they are getting in reward for the

work

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done by them which will not teach them a valuable

experience

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. In other terms if they are assigned a

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in which they are

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able to develop new skills by learning and become more mature by

experience

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then

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than

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a

work

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becomes a valuable one and teaches children lessons of life which are worth remembering for the whole life. There are many parts of the world where poor children because of their

deprivity

moral perversion; impairment of virtue and moral principles

depravity

have to

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on

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in

at

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restaurants and buildings to earn a living and feed their family as well.

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children start at

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a young

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that

there

of them or themselves

their

childhood is totally ruined in doing that

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. They are not able to get enough education and are not able to be developed. If similar kinds of

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could be done by some other children with their parents having enough

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it could make children indulge in a feeling of

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mindedness

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which could ruin a

child

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's future as that

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will not be able to focus on their studies and

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will give less importance to studies as compared to the

money

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they are getting to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their desired needs. Acting is

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prevalent amongst children at a low

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and parents find that fascinating and in order to promote that they take them to reality shows where their acting skills are judged and following that they take part in the competition in which they might win or lose. Losing a competition at

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a high level could make them feel dejected at

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an early

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age which

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age, which

altogether ruins their childhood and wakes up a feeling of competitiveness in those children.

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each and every day of competition children

feel

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feels

nervous, pressurised, stressed and anxious about their

performance which

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performance, which

could make them prone to

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a chronic disease of stress at

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a young

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that some of them are even not able to cope up with it which ruins their life as a whole.

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hand if

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hand, if

they are given

work

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experience

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in the field in which they are interested in or which makes them learn and grow as an individual at an early

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why not. There are many examples of young adults becoming a CEO of a reputed company at an early

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age which

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age, which

makes them far ahead of people who are at par with their

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.

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opportunity is only provided to them if they are working and developing new skills at an early

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of a teenager.

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might increase their learning power and improve their abilities and skills. All of the efforts are successful if the

child

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has

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learned

learning

learnt

attitude as compared to a

money

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minded attitude. To encapsulate above mentioned points and examples strengthen my stand and

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

disagree with the statement that paid

work

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will provide a valuable

experience

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and is important for learning and taking responsibility rather education is more important for a

child

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as compared to

work

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experience

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, a

child

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may get

work

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experience

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later on but education is very important to get completed at an early

age

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which makes a

child

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aware of their surroundings and conditions on the basis of which they can take their

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step.