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Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends. Other people prefer to be alone most of the time. Which way of life do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

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A friend in need is a friend indeed. Most of the people choose to spend their time with friends while others prefer to be alone. From my point of view
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to be with my friends.Here,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to discuss my arguments. Friends are the only person who understands each other
,
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,
showing
careness
feel concern or interest
cares
 towards each
,
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,
sharing of love and many others.
For example
,
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,
when we are in
problems
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the problems
 we can discuss only with our friends and we have the confidence that they might solve it easily.People forget their sorrows when they are with their friends.They always find secure in their hands.We have certain limits to share our problems with
family eventhough
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family, even though
family even though
 they play a major role in our
life
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lives
. In
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 view, some people choose to be alone most of the time.They
always looking
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always look
are always looking
 for the loneliness.Those people feel better when they are alone.
For
example they
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example, they
 get irritated to extra sounds.
This
 is because they may live in that circumstance from their childhood.Like, people who live in apartment will always like to be alone.For
them they
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them, they
 feel better in these circumstances. To conclude
,
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,
spending time with our friends will always
makes
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make
 my life better and
bette
(comparative of 'good') superior to another (of the same class or set or kind) in excellence or quality or desirability or suitability; more highly skilled than another
better
Bette
 to share the happiness and sorrows.
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