Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One

of the most conspicuous trends of todays world is a colossal upsurge in the

mumber

the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals

number

numbers

of people believing that the courage to contesting should be taught to offsprings while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

resist it by saying that collaborative thinking is the best to

became

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become

useful adults. I agree with the former view and

herw

in or at this place; where the speaker or writer is

here

in

this

essay, I would discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are

delige

a conversation between two persons

dialogue

of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant

one

is that by encouragement of competition in the children, they became dedicated towards their future and do

lot

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a lot

lots

of

hardwork

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hard work

to achieve

sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

successes

in their lives and they

also

know the value of

hardwork

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hard work

by

competing others

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competing with others

. It

cannot

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can not

only contribute to became self-confident but

also

lead to numerous other benefits in various fields

such

as to get name and fame in life. Thanks to

wide range

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a wide range

the wide range

of advantages it

offer

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offers

, masses can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives with much ease, efficacy and

conveience

the state of being suitable or opportune

convenience

. Needless to say all these merits stand

one

in a good stead as far as

aguementing

enlarge or increase

augmenting

their chances of prosperity and

excellance

the quality of excelling; possessing good qualities in high degree

excellence

is concerned.

Furthermore

, the

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

pivotal aspect of the aforementioned propositions is that it is not only likely to help

one

excel

ans

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

thrive in varied areas.

Besides

, education towards strife helps the children to be prepared for

further

competitioms

a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competitions

competition

in their life because today's era is a

competative

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

era and if people teach their offsprings about competition in vary early

age

Accept comma addition

age, then

then

they will

became

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become

perfet

being complete of its kind and without defect or blemish

perfect

to face any

challange

take exception to

challenge

and difficult situation in throughout their lives and acquire

sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

easily.

For instance

, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and May 2016

clearly indicates

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clearly indicate

that rivalry is

critcal

marked by a tendency to find and call attention to errors and flaws

critical

critically

and

crutial

of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis

crucial

for

sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

in any sector.

Hence

, many are in favour of

this

perception.

However

, a

sectin

a self-contained part of a larger composition (written or musical)

section

of society contradicts the above said view

poin

a geometric element that has position but no extension

point

pane

by saying that no

one

is perfect in everything so individuals

tech

impart skills or knowledge to

teach

their

adolesents

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity

adolescents

about co-operation because when they work together no

one

can

stuck

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stick

them from

sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

sauces

successes

because they are well known of their strengths and weaknesses and support each other in

difficult situation

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difficult situations

a difficult situation

. It

also

helps to develop social skills in them.

Therefore

, it is apparent why few are against

this

notion. In

compendiun

the act of combining things to form a new whole

compounding

, I would like to state that both the above said views are valid and relevant, but if I consider both. Logically, the former

one

that sense of competition should be encouraged is more powerful and effective.