The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the figure of university female and male
graduates
in Canada Use synonyms
for
over the period of 16 years from 1992 to 2007.
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apply
Overall
, what Linking Words
stand
out Change the verb form
stands
of
the graph is the numbers of female Change preposition
from
graduates
in Canada were immensely high when compared to male Use synonyms
graduates
all through the given span of Use synonyms
year
.
Looking to the year 1992, female Correct article usage
the year
graduates
were on the hike Use synonyms
of
nearly 99,000. Change preposition
by
Whereas
, males were in a steep decrease of nearly 71,000. Linking Words
However
, both femaleLinking Words
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, as well as male graduates,
as well as
male Linking Words
graduates
had an increase in number in the year between 1994 and 1996 (approx. 1, 05,000 and 75,000 respectively). Use synonyms
While
by the term Linking Words
1998
both female and male Add a comma
,1998
graduates
had a fall in the number (about 99,000 and 69,000 respectively). Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, by the end of the period 2006 female and male Linking Words
graduates
had a steady increase (approx. 1, 48,000 and 98,000 respectively).
To summarize, the numbers Use synonyms
female
Change preposition
of female
graduates
were higher than male Use synonyms
graduates
in universities in Canada throughout the given years.Use synonyms
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