Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

sports
Suggestion
Sports
is an unchangeable topic to human beings. Some
indinduals
think group sports have more advantages, while the others believe that solo
sports
spots before the eyes caused by opaque cell fragments in the vitreous humor and lens
spots
are better. In my view, the former is more reasonable because group sports promote the spirts of
coperation
the state of being in effect or being operative
operation
and include all merits of individual sports.
Team
sports motivate people to cooperate with others. These sports need
team
members to help each other. If any
mate
makes a mistake, they might lose the match. In
this
rase
any competition
race
ruse
ease
, each one in a group
have
Suggestion
has
to believe his or her
collgues
an associate that one works with
colleagues
and work together to win the
competation
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
.
For example
, in the basketball games, it often can be seen that a
team
mate
pull his or her
mate
to stand up when the
mate
drop down and they encourage each other.
Such
situation can never be
happend
Suggestion
happening
happened
in any individual sport. As well as cooperation views,
colletive
done by or characteristic of individuals acting together
collective
sports include all
bonefits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
bone fits
of the solo sports. Some people argue that
individual
Suggestion
Individual
sports can improve one's attention and
healeh
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
whole
.
However
, these merits are
also
contained by
team
sports.
For example
, compared with running or tennis, football could
also
make people faster, stronger and more sensitive. In conclusion,
team
sports is superior than individual sports, because it can motivate
sense
Suggestion
a sense
of cooperation and
also
have the benefits of the solo sports.
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