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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In these days, the world is a global village and people can travel easily everywhere in the world without any difficulties. Various countries have different culture and
traditions but
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traditions, but
 mostly natives do not force the tourist to follow their rituals and customs. As we know that different region people behave according to their areas, but
international tourist industry
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the international tourist industry
 has been created the hurdle and stressful conditions between natives and outsiders. Mostly tourists travel different regions:
therefore
, they can explore the uniqueness of other areas. Their clothing, living and food are different from
foreigner
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foreigners
a foreigner
, as
regionals
the extended spatial location of something
regions
 are living their lives according to their environment:
on the other hand
, it is hard for other people`s country to accept them because they are living their lives according to their circumstances.
This
 conflict can make
tough situation
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a tough situation
 between two
nationals but
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nationals, but
 we should always remember the basic
morals
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moral
 values of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 and respect the other nations, but these difficulties can be solved by
tourist
Suggestion
touring
 companies, whereas these companies create the more dramatic conditions. On the side of
picture
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the picture
, if we do our
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 arrangements by ourselves, we can easily get
visa
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a visa
 and have less expensive trips without involvement of travel agency.
Moreover
, today is
era
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the era
 of
internet
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the internet
, we can easily get information about any region within a
second
; so, we should gather information about everything about that area before
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 that area. In
this
 way, we can avoid the misunderstanding. To sum up all the arguments,
Traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 is not
difficult task
Suggestion
a difficult task
 if we do it with full preparation. With
help
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the help
 of internet and sweet behaviour, we can go anywhere in
this
 world and enjoy that place.
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