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Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

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 of all the public holidays, like the independence event is an excellent event to foster the patriotism among the youth and show them how their ancestors have sacrificed to take their freedom from the colonization and they have in return preserve their lands and work closely to develop it ,
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 yearly in Qatar during their celebrations on 18th of December you can easily remarks the Qatari flags over the houses and the cars and how proud the Qataris looks.
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 To conclude ,spending money wisely is essential from any government but the people have the total right to celebrate their special occasion and to be covered by the authority
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