The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The above diagram depicts the annual financial condition of a USA charity operating for the benefit of children, including both money inflow and outflow.
Most importantly,
this
organization is running a Linking Words
balance
budget as its revenue is approximately 53.5 million dollars Change the verb form
balanced
while
its expenditures total Linking Words
to
roughly 53.2 million dollars. Change preposition
apply
Although
the surplus is very small, Linking Words
this
charity is able to meet all its financial obligation.
On the revenue side, Donated Food accounted for the majority of its income, standing at 86.6%. The Linking Words
next
major contributor was from “Community Contribution”, representing 10.4%, Linking Words
while
the “program Revenue” generated 2.2%. Both Government Grants and Investment Income brought in 0.2% equally. Linking Words
Finally
, it received 0.4% from other Income. Incidentally, these Linking Words
last
three groups combined less than 1% of the total incoming money.
As expected, 95.8% of the total money was spent on program services. Linking Words
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, 2.6% was required for Fundraising. Linking Words
Finally
, Management and General expenses exhausted the rest of the total at 1.6%.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, next, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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