You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

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Johnson, I, Timir Baran Chakraborty, am a tenant of your apartment at Raspberry Road, London. I am writing to bring to your notice that the geyser in our flat has not been working since
last
Sunday, 10th February 2020. On Sunday morning, one of our flatmates noticed a spark near the machine, and since
then
it has stopped functioning. We were glad that you sent your workmen to repair the water heater;
however
, they failed to troubleshoot the issue and suggested
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the equipment.
As a result
, we are living without hot water, which is extremely important in
this
chilly winter. Our daily chores: Washing, Bathing and other toiletry usage have become extremely difficult.
Consequently
, one of our flatmates fallen sick
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and running a high fever.
hence
, I want you to take immediate action to replace the water heater within 3 days after receiving
this
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event, if you fail to install the new geyser, we will have no other option but to vacate the house. We really liked your house and hope you will pay attention to
this
urgent issue. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Timir Baran Chakraborty

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  • I am writing to bring to your attention...
  • I wish to formally complain about...
  • Despite several attempts to repair...
  • The absence of hot water and heating...
  • This ongoing issue has caused considerable inconvenience...
  • As a result, it has become increasingly difficult to...
  • I urge you to take immediate action...
  • I propose that a specialist be consulted...
  • Should this problem persist...
  • I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience...
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