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The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that the parents should be educated through parenting courses for effective children's growth.
This
 essay would bring out the pros and cons of the parenting courses, and debate on the same with concluding remarks. Nowadays the family is becoming more and more nuclear and isolated from the society,
as a result
 of which the parents are lacking most of the children upbringing skills. To bridge
this
 gap, it is recommended to enforce all the parents to take up a parenting course. A typical parenting course would concentrate on the overall development of the child, which includes, food habits and lifestyle change. It
also
 includes the anger management lessons which are must for the current society where parents as well as children are more and more short tempered and need a prior course to tackle the same in a diplomatic and constructive way.
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