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Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalization?

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One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the usage of English
language
 in almost every part of the world. There is a widespread worry that increased exposure to other languages and cultures will threaten the dominance of the English
language
. In my opinion,
this
 apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected. There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to globalization, the interaction between people from different languages and diverse cultural backgrounds will inevitably increase. Not only will it help people to communicate effectively with each other, but it will
also
 be embraced by more and more people. Needless to say, all these merits stand the English
language
 in a good stead as far as gaining more popularity is concerned. Another pivotal aspect of
this
 argument is that now English is the
language
 of Science, Commerce, trade, arts, History, literature, media, entertainment and what not.
Besides
, the English
language
 is
also
 used in software and hardware developments as commands are given to the computer in English.
Hence
, it is apparent why many are in favour of English
language
 will remain to be the global
language
 despite globalization. In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of globalization in the proliferation of English
language
 are too great to ignore.
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