Some people think the governments should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve the environments problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that massive usage of fossil fuels exacerbates the environmental issues.
Hence
, many people believe if
price
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the price
of
fuel
is raised
then
it would solve all the
biohazards
the common European short-winged hawk
buzzards
. I do not agree that just focussing on one specific area which is
tiny part
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a tiny part
of
this
humongous problem is the solution;
this
essay will discuss why. Taking
such
measure does more damage compared to the benefit. Because of
increase
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the increase
in
fuel
rates, there could be conflicts amongst the common man and the administration. Having taken
such
step of hiking prices would fill public with rage lead to curfews and
sloganeering
,
for instance
,
hence
, disrupting balance in the society.
Moreover
, despite the fact that traffic might decrease due to
this
step, motor companies will suffer and it would affect the national economy directly.
However
, if more effective ways like using electricity produced by solar energy or other renewable energy sources are used to power
the motor vehicles
Suggestion
motor vehicles than the
the motor vehicles than
then
above stated issues can be governed.
On the other hand
, major air pollutants are the gases
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
residues from the industrial
waste
. Carbon emission from vehicles
doesnt
does not
doesn't
affect the ecosystem much as compared to toxic
waste
generated by industries. All kinds of greenhouse gases like nitrogen, methane, carbon
monooxide
an oxide containing just one atom of oxygen in the molecule
monoxide
etc.
are
Suggestion
Are
discharged by manufacturing companies without treating them,
this
in turn leads to spike in
temprature which
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temperature, which
temperature which
temperatures which
directly impacts the climate in
detrimental way
Suggestion
a detrimental way
detrimental ways
.
Therefore
, having appropriate
waste
management facilities to treat
contaminated
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Contaminated
and toxic
waste
before releasing into
environment
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the environment
would help and
expidite
speed up the progress of; facilitate
expedite
expedites
the process of saving our ecosystem. In the nutshell,
this
essay discussed the reasons why raising
fuel
price
is not
a
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an
effective answer to environmental
problems including
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problems, including
decline
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the decline
in
nation's economy
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the nation's economy
due hit in motor companies and industrial
waste
is
teh
definite article
the
major catalyst to the
biohazard
Suggestion
Biohazard
.
Hence
, rather than increasing
fuel
price
having proper
waste
management facilities should be the focus. In my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
, I disagree that just
fuel
price
hike is not the answer to solve environmental problems.

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