The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart gives information about the percentage of the elder people population in
USA
, Sweden and Japan from 1940 to 2040. Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the population increased in all countries and it is expected to have the same trend.
USA and Sweden have approximately the same change during the period given. Moving to a more detailed analysis, both countries stood at just under 10% in 1940, then
rose significantly to 15% till
1980. After that, the USA rate decreased slightly to 2020 and is predicted to grow to around 23% in the final year, Change preposition
by
while
the percentage in Sweden fluctuated noticeably to just over 2020 and will jump to 25% in 2040.
Population
of 65 aged people in Japan started at 5% in the first year, Add an article
The population
then
declined till 1960, after
that remained stable till 1990 to 2,5% value. Correct word choice
and after
Finally
, the proportion increased, it will save this
trend in the last
year and will reach the peak at 26%.Submitted by sudnevanastya95 on
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