Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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According to researchers

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main component

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which influences our personality is characteristics we are born with.

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type of thinking can't be true at all and I totally regret it.

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illustrate evidences

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which express my ideas about

influence

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the influence

of experiences on our personality in our lifetime. In my opinion

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experiences develop our characteristics.Because

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when we were

baby

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babies

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we were like a white and clear paper unlike others.I strongly

beileve

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believe

that

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the happenings and growing changed us.

For instance

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we learnt huge amount of

informations

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information

and met many people in school

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moreover

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we got

main part

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the main part

of our characteristics from them.As

Aristotel

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Aristotle

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we are the overall of 5

person

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people

persons

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who are around us.From

this

aspect

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behaviour

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the behaviour

of our parents

also have

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also has

influence on our personality and development. As I mentioned

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nobody born with characteristics.

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I must admit that

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there are some components which come from

blood

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the blood

.These components

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genetically and sometimes they are temporary.As an

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example, gestures

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mimics

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genetic defects

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etc

continuing in the same way

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I disagree with

researchers' opinion

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the researchers' opinion

a researchers' opinion

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however

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I admit that there are some

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points

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which show they are

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partly right

.But I strongly

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accept as true; take to be true

believe

that

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expierences

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experiences

people have in their lifetime overweigh

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the components people are born with.

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nature vs. nurture debate
genetic inheritance
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twins studies
malleable characteristics
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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Fully explain your ideas

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The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK. Write at least 150 words

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old building .Tho money should spend on building new modern buildings instead .To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivls;during festival periods,people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this statement?