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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

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Unfortunately, till humans exist, we cannot stop human harmful activity.
However
, we may control
this
 devil kind specie in some ways. Deforestation is one of the cruel harms that humans are causing all over the world, which it has serious consequences for the environment. If we are not thinking of other species, at least let us care about ourselves and cause less trouble. Generally, preventing is much better than healing.
Therefore
, it is more efficient and easier to restrain deforestation and define limits to it.
This
 needs a sustainable regime of everything
such
 as
sustainable economy
Suggestion
a sustainable economy
, sustainable industry and sufficient capacities to overcome the proper technology, financial and economic costs and other factors intervened in order to have a healthy and green environment.
On the other hand
, there is an approach for compensating and healing after causing harm.
This
 manner is more expensive and less efficient.
However
, still it is useful. It worth to raise an
environmental
Suggestion
environmentally
 principle called ‘PPP’ stands for ‘Polluter Pays Principle’.
This
 principle claims that polluter is responsible for the pollution it caused and have to pay all the costs and compensations.
For example
, we could make it compulsory for the logging factories and industries to pay an adequate money as a compensation or plant trees vastly meanwhile they are cutting them down.
In addition
 to environmental principles, it is important to mention recycling. We always have to bear in mind recycling and its slogan ‘keep it green’. The process of recycling had been used in all generations since its establishment. We could reuse a lot of paper-based products through our daily lives or pay attention to recycling standards and rules while throwing things away. All in all, whether we use pre-methods or post-methods of
environment
Suggestion
environmental
 protection, both are useful for solving deforestation problem.
Thus
, we have to choose the best method, in accordance with the society we live in and its capacities.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deforestation
  • Biodiversity
  • Afforestation
  • Reforestation
  • Sustainable/sustainability
  • Urbanization
  • Timber
  • Infrastructure
  • Indigenous populations
  • Climate change
  • Ecosystem services
  • Ecotourism
  • Biodegradable
  • Renewable resources
  • Carbon footprint
  • Conservation
  • Environmental degradation
  • Habitat destruction
  • Enforcement
  • Regulation
  • Awareness campaigns
  • Corporate responsibility
  • Supply chains
  • Illegal logging
  • Satellite monitoring
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