Evaluate the usefulness of Bigelow and La Gaipa’s work for understanding children’s friendship.

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will evaluate the
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conducted by Bigelow and La
Gaipa
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and how useful it is when understanding children's relationships. Bigelow and La
Gaipa
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set out to investigate 'children's understandings of friendship at various stages of development' (Brownlow
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one side of one leaf (of a book or magazine or newspaper or letter etc.) or the written or pictorial matter it contains
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242). It is important to consider that at the point of investigation (1975) there was very little known about children's friendships, as the focus of
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was mostly on emotional relationships and what things attract people to
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another. In order to conduct their
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, Bigelow and La
Gaipa
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created a means of investigating the changes in a
childs
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child's
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interpretation of friendship as they grew older. In order to do
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, they asked
children
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the children
to think about their best
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of the same
gender
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and to write an
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on what they expected of their best
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and how
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might differ from what they expect from other people. Bigelow and La
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collected 480 essays written
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children aged six and fourteen years old, who were in upper-middle to lower-middle-class homes in Canada, they collected from eight different schools with an even mix of thirty boys and thirty girls from each. Before conducting their
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, Bigelow and La
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created a list of different characteristics that they assumed children might want to include when writing their essays,
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as 'sharing common activities, engaging in organised play, admiration, loyalty and commitment, genuineness, and similarity in attitudes and values' (Brownlow
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one side of one leaf (of a book or magazine or newspaper or letter etc.) or the written or pictorial matter it contains
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242-243). These were
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used when analysing each
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. They used content analysis when comparing said results and found 16 of the 21 expectations to be more frequent in the older
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
children's
essays.
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was suggested to mean that as children get older the expectations of their best friends get more complex.
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with, the
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of selecting the
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, as well as the
size
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of the
sample
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has some advantages and disadvantages. The advantage of choosing
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a large
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size
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is through the increased accuracy in mean values, and the smaller margin for error. Another advantage of having a large
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size
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is that
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that might end up skewing a smaller
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sizes' results can be identified.
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, there were
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issues
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expresses the means used
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how they chose their
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.
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,
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issue apparent with the
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conducted is through only choosing children coming from upper-middle and lower-middle-class families in Canada.
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could
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lead to a sampling error, due to the
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that children from other classes were not included when researching and so it would be unknown whether their findings would remain true for all types of
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economic
class, or if there would be changes. Another issue with the
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used is the
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that all participants were from Canada.
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can be seen as a disadvantage as Bigelow and La
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are unable to show whether culture may impact children's understanding of friendship, due to the
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that all children used were from the same - Western - culture.
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, it can be argued that while Bigelow and La GaIpas'
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is useful when considering Western, middle-class children and their expectations with relationships, it is not so useful when considering other cultures and classes.
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,
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clear advantage of the
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size
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and
method
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used is the
gender
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difference observed. Because the children were asked to write about a
friend
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of the same
gender
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, there could be a comparison made between male-male friendships and female-female friendships.
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the findings on
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difference were rather minimal, the
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is still useful as it leads to people being able to draw data for both genders,
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of only being able to use data for
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gender
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and drawing estimations and assumptions for the other, which could end up being inaccurate. Another way in which Bigelow and La Gaipas
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might not be as useful is through the usage of writing an
essay
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.
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is because it can be argued that the younger participants might not have had the written skills needed to be able to write an
essay
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describing the expectations of their best
friend
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.
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this
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method
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remains useful when considering older children - as largely they would have had the written skills needed- it can be argued that the results for the younger participants might not be wholly accurate, and
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not as useful, as results from another type of
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of collecting data.
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,
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way in which Bigelow and La Gaipas
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is useful is through the
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that it was the
first
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of its type. As mentioned before, in the 70s'
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regarding relationships focused on emotional relationships, so, though Bigelow and La Gaipas experiment, they opened up
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idea for discussion, and brought attention to something that had previously been unknown to psychology.
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, through the large age range of the participants, it allowed showed how children regarded friendships at different ages and
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allowed for

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