The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
amout
of Underground Station Passengers from 06.00 am to 22.00 pm. Correct your spelling
amount
Overall
, it fluctuates and peaks at certain times.
The number of passengers reachest
the highest point with 400 Correct your spelling
reaches
people
at 08.00 o'clock. But then
, the
following two hours, it decreases significantly to only 180 Change preposition
in the
people
. The figure rises again slightly to 300 people
, however
after 14.00 o'clock it begins to plummet down to only 80 Add a comma
,however
people
. However
, there is significant
increase Add an article
a significant
the significant
of
passengers after, which peaks at 18.00 pm. The amount Change preposition
in
then
drop
down Change the verb form
drops
seamelessly
to 110 Correct your spelling
seamlessly
shamelessly
people
, with no significant increase in the 3 hours following.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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