every year several languages dies out,some people think that this is not important because ;life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world . to what extend do you agree or disagree

It is a fact that there are numerous languages all over the w
orld but
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world, but
every year some of them will disappear.
Although
it’s believed that
this
is not a crucial problem, it will be worthy if there are smaller number of languages that’s available to communicate. I think, Even it’s better to have a simpler way of c
ommunication,
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communicating
preserving languages mean to preserve culture and literature of a nation. On the one hand, having fewer languages e
nable
Suggestion
enables
individuals to contact with each other in a lesser complex way. So that during communication they don’t need anyone to translate speeches for them as well as their understanding of ideas will be excellent. For examples, when a dentist participates in an international conference, it will be much easier and time saving for him if he understands their
language
.
t
hus
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Thus
,
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,
having lesser languages to use mean fewer misunderstandings.
On the other hand
,
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,
every
language
represents folklore and history of a specific group of people. Even it shows the way how they organize their daily life and their traditions so extinction of
language
is disappearing one nation who took many efforts until they had built their community.
For instance
, every culture has its own phrases,
p
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,
oems and novels when their languages extinct
,
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,
these t
hing
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things
could be translated into other languages but still it can’t give the exact meaning.
Thus
folklore and literature go with the disappearance of a
language
. In conclusion,
although
it’s believed that having less languages is a positive point in developing easier ways of communication. Even
this
is a considerable point
,
Accept space
,
I think preserving a
language
is important to a degree that it lead to p
reservation
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the preservation
of a community that uses the
language
.

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