every year several languages dies out,some people think that this is not important because ;life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world . to what extend do you agree or disagree

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It is a fact that there are numerous languages all over the w

orld but

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world, but

every year some of them will disappear.

Although

it’s believed that

this

is not a crucial problem, it will be worthy if there are smaller number of languages that’s available to communicate. I think, Even it’s better to have a simpler way of c

ommunication,

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communicating

preserving languages mean to preserve culture and literature of a nation. On the one hand, having fewer languages e

nable

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enables

individuals to contact with each other in a lesser complex way. So that during communication they don’t need anyone to translate speeches for them as well as their understanding of ideas will be excellent. For examples, when a dentist participates in an international conference, it will be much easier and time saving for him if he understands their

language

hus

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Thus

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having lesser languages to use mean fewer misunderstandings.

On the other hand

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every

language

represents folklore and history of a specific group of people. Even it shows the way how they organize their daily life and their traditions so extinction of

language

is disappearing one nation who took many efforts until they had built their community.

For instance

, every culture has its own phrases,

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oems and novels when their languages extinct

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these t

hing

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things

could be translated into other languages but still it can’t give the exact meaning.

Thus

folklore and literature go with the disappearance of a

language

. In conclusion,

although

it’s believed that having less languages is a positive point in developing easier ways of communication. Even

this

is a considerable point

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I think preserving a

language

is important to a degree that it lead to p

reservation

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the preservation

of a community that uses the

language

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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284 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
Digital archiving

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