People prefer to shop from super markets than local. What are the reason behind it.

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In present time, people have altered the way of shopping and they take as an entertainment activity. Modern
market
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has got a lot of priority as compared to local
market
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among people. I accord
this
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statement due to the reason that huge facilities which are given by modern
market
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in the subsequent paragraphs. To embark upon, there are many causes behind the preference
to
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for
modern
market
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by people.
First
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and foremost is that enormous amenities
such
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as different type of discount on various goods, perks and so on. These things influence to
people purchase
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people, purchase
things from modern
market
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and everything
are
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is
available under one
roof which
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roof, which
are in several varieties and in good quality.
For example
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Big Bazaar, there are
lot
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lots
of
brand
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brands
of every product like shoes, garments and many more as well as different section for different items
such
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as furniture,
electronic
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electronics
, grocery and cosmetic. So they have no need to go any other place for shopping and they
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also says
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also say
have also said
are also saying
there time because all things are present
at
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in
one place.
Furthermore
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, people merely not do shopping
there
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there, however
however
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they
also
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do enjoyment there because there are some movie
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
and outlets, where people love to do lunch or dinner. Modern
market
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also
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provides parking facility to their
customer
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customers
and distinct type of
payments
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payment
methods like online by credit card and cash. So they no need to carry cash.
Moreover
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, people have got new experience of shopping via modern
market
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and have become more conscious and up-to-date about new brand and product which are in high quality and status. In conclusion,
nodoubt
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no doubt
, people
have changed
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has changed
the way of shopping and give a lot of priority to
modern
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the modern market
market
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because it has improved the experience of people towards shopping so
that is
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why they take it as
recreational activity
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a recreational activity
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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