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As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human being in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idead horrifies most people, yet is is no longer mere science fiction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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At the beginning of time when people were new to
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 world, always feared nature, but always tried to overcome it. But gradually with the help of a tool, called "
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", we begin to conquer the world. With the help of
science
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, a man's average
life
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 span now increased from twenty years to ninety years and that's why now-a-days, the human clone concept becomes a well discussed topic. But according to my view, increasing a person's
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 in an artificial way disrupts the
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 stability and
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 it gives more power to
rich
reach a destination, either real or abstract
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 people and creates imbalance. We all know that everything has a bane and boon and
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 is
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 not different.
Science
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 helps us to give a certain amount of lifetime, which was merely a dream like hundred years ago. But if we stretch that span,
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 it will disrupt the natural
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 cycle and destroy the ecology. For an example, we can say that a living person nearly emits 343 kg of carbon dioxide directly or indirectly into the environment and expanding the living time will harm more.
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 can become a main ingredient for the cause of Global warming. Apart from those, our
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 is not perfect and there was always divided according to wealth and that will be same in future
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. Human cloning is not cheap, so it is not like everyone can afford it. That's why the top layer of the
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 will be mainly beneficial with
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 latest invention of
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. Not only
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, but
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 it will be applicable for the persons whose intention is evil in the
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 as if they can accumulate enough money, they can
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 take benefit from cloning and can create huge social problems. To sum it up, intention of
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 has been always good, but not the implementer's. As history has many examples of human behaviour controlled by greed and lust and that can repeat again in the case of cloning as
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 will not be available for everyone in the
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 and will
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 create a deep and harmful impact in the environment.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sanctity of human life
  • organ rejection
  • perfectly matched organs
  • identity and individuality
  • psychological issues
  • stringent legal frameworks
  • abuse and ensure ethical practices
  • stem cell research
  • medical benefits
  • ethical concerns
  • exploitation
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