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traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#traffic #cities #companies #factories #employees #countryside
In
modern world
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the modern world
,
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,
global warming and air pollution are highly debated issues related to the problem of excessive commuters that lead to
heavey
of comparatively great physical weight or density
heavy
 traffic jam and industrial factories in mega cities which both lead to the environmental problems.
some
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Some
 people are of opinion that workers of industrial factories need to immigrate to
suburbs
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the suburbs
 due to reduce fuel exhausted in towns.
from
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From
 my perspective
,
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,
it can be a wise solution to resolve
this
seriuos
concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
 problem by some
applicaple
capable of being applied; having relevance
applicable
 approaches.
to
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To
 begin with
,
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,
although
 urban living has many advantages that
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
outweighs
 its disadvantages
,
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,
people must have a circular resolution to reduce any kinds of pollutions
fto
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
creates
great
high quality standard living
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a high quality standard living
.
therefore to
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Therefore, to
Therefore to
 tackle any barriers.
fist
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Fist
 of all, large factories and its workers ` transportation can be a wise way because of less commuting in the town.
furthermore it
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Furthermore, it
Furthermore it
is not only lead
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is not only led
has not only led
 to less heavy traffic
jam but
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jam, but
also
 protect environment to more pollutions.
in
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In
 other
words not
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words, not
 only all industrial factories are essential to transfer
suburbs but
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suburbs, but
 their employers
also
 must have offered better condition to live outside
town
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the town
.
because
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Because
 living in
suburb
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a suburb
the suburb
suburbs
 may disturb in their other member of their families.
on
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On
 the other
hand most
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hand, most
 of workers who are tenants can benefit from
this
 situation
with
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by
 buying their own house in small town.
beside
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Inside
Beside
,
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,
they get
to known
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to know
 as environmental friendly person who help to keep
planet earth
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the planet earth
 for
next generation
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the next generation
 beside personal progress and the most significant one is not wasting their time by
get
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getting
 stuck in traffic
,
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,
so
,
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,
they will have more time to carry on
thier
of them or themselves
their
 personal stuff or any
sidejob
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side job
 if they have.
to
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To
 conclude
,
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,
transfer industrial
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transfer, industrial
 factories and large companies to countryside must support and priorities by local
athorithies
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
 to tackle environmental issues for earth
inhabitats
a person who inhabits a particular place
inhabitants
.

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