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It has been observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects at university. What do you think are the causes of the problem? What are the effects on society

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It is an irrefutable fact that nowadays the
science
 and technology develops to the peak point. In some countries, people want to study in
science field
Suggestion
science fields
the science field
a science field
 in universities, but due to some reasons, they don’t approach it. In
this
 essay, I intend to discuss what are the causes and impact of the development before the reasonable conclusion can be drawn. There are several logics why student don’t able to study a sci-fi course in colleges.
Firstly
, the marking system in the school grade system is the major problem. Most of the colleges and university allow to get admission in
science
, if the youngster has higher grades in schools. There is no doubt the other students have a more creative mind and productive as compared to higher marks person.
Therefore
, that’s the main reason folks do not take
science
 subject.
In addition
, every country almost entered in the race of technological development,
such
 as space, biological and so on. Because of
this
, the demand of scientists among every country is very high, because of lack of
science
 student's development is stuck at some point. For an example, NASA tries to make a space shuttle which will do mining in the space.
Moreover
, According to the NASA, there are tons of metal are buried in the asteroids which will fulfil the demand of titanium in the earth and
also
 produce electricity. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that every nation have to encourage their teenager to show their skills in scientific field,
instead
 of selecting students by their grades.

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