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Nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports. Why is it happening? Does it have a positive or negative effect on their development?

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It is true that in the New Era most of the children are are time in front of
computer
 and they are not interested in outdoor activities in
this
 I am going to discuss the reason for
this
 and is it create a positive or negative development to children the main reason by the children spend most time with the
computer
system
 is because of the busy schedule of their parents most of the parents are employed and they provide
system
 to to their child for playing
game
then
 parents can do their own work and children will not disturb them
moreover
 nowadays cities are too crowded in cities there is no enough space for children in playing
game
 they are not interested for go out but
computer
 having variety
game
 that
game
 having several stages if they want any state they have the tendency to move on to the
next
 stages so they are playing it vigorously one of the greatest problem of playing games in
computer
system
 will lead to damage the health of the children more trust is needed for their eyes while playing games in
computer
 too much entertained by sitting in front of
computer
system
 most of the
game
 feel like reality games are developed day by day and children are playing the
game
 and they are addictive
on the other hand
 is there Games will affecting the growth and development of children order what result the physical and mental growth of children
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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