some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this?

In our recent fast world, you need to reach what you want in the easiest possible ways.
Also
, having clear places around you helps in better thinking.
This
is what is said by many psychologists and ordinary people.
However
,
this
is not always the case for all as some people feel more comfortable if they having their stuff around them either at
home
or
work
place
. And they even feel more relaxed being surrounded by lots of things. Of course, for some people when it comes to
home
décor they even find it more modern to have lots of things everywhere. Apparently, it is extremely subjective issue that depends on the personality of each one. For me, I find it puzzling actually. I mean, I am personally
will
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willing
go to the extreme of having a tidy
home
and
work
place
. In fact, I could even get nervous if I felt that I am setting in an untidy or unorganized zone, not just at
home
and
work
but
also
at a café or on a shop
for example
. Being an OCD person forces me not to keep silent and it happened to me before while shopping at a store that I started to organize the cream bottles on
shelf
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the shelf
based on their size and type before realizing where I am.
On the other hand
, I find it confusing for me if someone else tried to help me organize my
place
or my desk at
office
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the office
.
Also
, for
me on
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me, on
a personal aspect I find being organized is a relative point sometimes. Like, for me sometimes others could find my room full of lots of stuff, but for me it is still organized.
That is
applicable only if I put things
on
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in
its places based on my view. But, should it be the same case for others? Do all people feel better if they are in an organized
place
? Honestly, I thought that must be correct.
However
, I was shocked when I met other people at
work
who would just do the extreme opposite at their desk (
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
they
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They
are surrounded with lots of stuff everywhere and nothing
on
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in
its right
place
).
Moreover
, the feel better that way and when I tried to organize their desks they got perplexed and could not perform as fast as they were previously. To conclude, we can say affirmatively that
this
is an extremely personal matter that cannot be unified for all. But, for me, I would go to the extreme level of
tidness
the habit of being tidy
tidiness
tiredness
in wherever
place
I stay in and having any issue interrupting
this
will by extension affect my interaction, performance and the way I deal with others. And if I had to stay in a
place
stuffed with lots of things, it has to be organized at least, in a way that I can recall and feel comfortable with it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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