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In 2007, there were six bus stops found both side of the clinic route, which vanished in 2010. Next, one bus station built in 2010, at the west side of the hospital road. Besides, the bus station attached with two roundabouts in 2010.

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The double maps illustrate the road structure of the city hospital from 2007 to 2010. Overall, it is clear that the roads were retained same as before.
Converseley
Suggestion
Conversely
, the bus stops and
car
 parking were refurbish, and
two
 roundabouts reconstructed newly. In 2007, there were six bus stops found both
side
Suggestion
sides
 of the clinic route, which vanished in 2010.
Next
, one bus station built in 2010,
at
Suggestion
on
 the west side of the hospital road.
Besides
, the bus station attached with
two
 roundabouts in 2010.
Similarly
, there was a
car
 parking for both staff and public located at the east side of the hospital route in 2007. Interestingly, that parking divided into
two
 sections. The staff
car
 park stood
at
Suggestion
in
 the same position,
however
, the public
car
 park rebuilt beside the ring road.
Finally
,
two
rounabouts
marked by obliqueness or indirection in speech or conduct
roundabouts
runabouts
 created in the year of 2010, which attached
with
Suggestion
to
 the bus station according to the
second
 map.
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