The charts below show that UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full time work after leaving college in 2008
A glance at the graph provided reveals information
of
activities Change preposition
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which
British Change preposition
in which
graduate
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graduates
post
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post-graduate
graduate
participated after
college graduation apart from Change preposition
in after
full time
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full-time
work
in 2008. Strikingly, Further
study was the most popular choice of activities
among Fix the agreement mistake
activity
students
, compared to the least popularity
of Voluntary Replace the word
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Work
.
Regarding graduate
students
, the highest number belong
to Change the verb form
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Further
study, at 29665 while
Voluntary work
reported the lowest date in the total choices of them, at only 3500 students
. The number of students
who chose Part time
Job was higher than the figure for Unemployment, with nearly 18000 and over 16000 Add a hyphen
Part-time
students
, respectively.
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most
students
in the same year, Further
study also
headed the list with 2725 students
, closely followed by Part time Work
with over 2500 choices. While
there were approximately 1700 post graduate
who choose Unemployment, only 345 Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
students
who
decided to become volunteers.Correct pronoun usage
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