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The charts below show that UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full time work after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show that UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full time work after leaving college in 2008
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of
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 activities
which
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 British
graduate
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graduates
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 and
post
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post-graduate
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graduate
 participated
after
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 college graduation apart from
full time
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full-time
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work
 in 2008. Strikingly,
Further
 study was the most popular choice of
activities
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activity
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 among
students
, compared to the least
popularity
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 of Voluntary
Work
. Regarding
graduate
students
, the highest number
belong
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 to
Further
 study, at 29665
while
 Voluntary
work
 reported the lowest date in the total choices of them, at only 3500
students
. The number of
students
 who chose
Part time
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Part-time
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 Job was higher than the figure for Unemployment, with nearly 18000 and over 16000
students
, respectively. For
post
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most
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students
 in the same year,
Further
 study
also
 headed the list with 2725
students
, closely followed by Part time
Work
 with over 2500 choices.
While
 there were approximately 1700 post
graduate
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graduates
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 who choose Unemployment, only 345
students
who
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decided to become volunteers.
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