You happened to witness a film being shot in your locality. Write a letter in 120-150 words to a friend describing your experience. You are Rani/Raman. 15. Vinay Nagar. Doty. ADS. 15. Vinay Nagar, Ooty.

Dear Doty, Hope you are doing well,it has been a while since
i
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have heard from you
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.
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As
your
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are very passionate about
technical
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the technical
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aspects of
movie making
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movie-making
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, I wanted to share my experience
on
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witnessing a film being shot near my home.I wanted to come and share in person but my exams have kept me busy. The movie being shot was of
action
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the action
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drama genre,
akshay
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Akshay
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kumar
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Kumar
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and
katrika
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Katrina
Patrika
were on lead roles.Akshay
being
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my
favorite
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favourite
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actor I was on cloud nine when
i
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saw him, and
also
I went and shook hands with him. Coming to the technical aspects, I was close to
camera
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the camera
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, the scene being shot was
a
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action one, where
hero
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the hero
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jumped from a 2 feet tall
strcuture
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structure
made of concrete but
for
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to
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my surprise when replayed on camera the footage looked as if the hero jumped from a 10 ft building
instead
.
Also
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the dress of actors and background dancers looked dull in reality but on
camera
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,camera
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they looked bright and very
colorful
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colourful
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. The instruments used for
film making
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filmmaking
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were huge, it included cameras , rolling machines,
ladder like
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ladder-like
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pickers,lightings etc.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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