You happened to witness a film being shot in your locality. Write a letter in 120-150 words to a friend describing your experience. You are Rani/Raman. 15. Vinay Nagar. Doty. ADS. 15. Vinay Nagar, Ooty.

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Dear Doty, Hope you are doing well,it has been a while since

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have heard from you

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your

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are very passionate about

technical

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the technical

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aspects of

movie making

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movie-making

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, I wanted to share my experience

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witnessing a film being shot near my home.I wanted to come and share in person but my exams have kept me busy. The movie being shot was of

action

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the action

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drama genre,

akshay

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Akshay

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kumar

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Kumar

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and

katrika

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Katrina

Patrika

were on lead roles.Akshay

being

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favorite

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actor I was on cloud nine when

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saw him, and

also

I went and shook hands with him. Coming to the technical aspects, I was close to

camera

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the camera

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, the scene being shot was

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action one, where

hero

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the hero

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jumped from a 2 feet tall

strcuture

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structure

made of concrete but

for

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my surprise when replayed on camera the footage looked as if the hero jumped from a 10 ft building

instead

Also

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the dress of actors and background dancers looked dull in reality but on

camera

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they looked bright and very

colorful

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. The instruments used for

film making

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filmmaking

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were huge, it included cameras , rolling machines,

ladder like

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pickers,lightings etc.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

186 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You happened to witness a film being shot in your locality. Write a letter in 120-150 words to a friend describing your experience. You are Rani/Raman. 15. Vinay Nagar. Doty. ADS. 15. Vinay Nagar, Ooty.

The Closing

Many people today know more about international pop or movie stars than about famous people in the history of their own country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing sof skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e. g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries,owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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