It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays everyone is having their own
talent
as some of them are acquired it by birth and some are leanred
after reaching having or showing profound knowledge
learned
lean red
certain age
due to their interest. It is always argued both sides, Suggestion
a certain age
however
, this
essay agrees that talent
and skills are given by god
when they are born. In the supernatural being conceived as the perfect and omnipotent and omniscient originator and ruler of the universe; the object of worship in monotheistic religions
God
this
essay we will discuss both the views before coming to a conclusion.
Firstly
, there are people who are entertaining the entire world and making us to control our stress with their melodious voices. This
is not at all possible with teaching or by giving lecture
and Suggestion
lectures
additionally
people cannot gain the softness in their voice
. For example
, A famous hollywood
singer Madonna has a the film industry of the United States
Hollywood
best
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good
better
voice
in the world which will make everyone to enjoy and forget their sadness. She got such
a nice voice
from her childhood and not learned any where
in the school or university.
at or in or to any place
anywhere
Secondly
, it is unachievable by people who wants to learn few talents when they did not have it by birth.
There are so many people who tried their luck in different sectors and did not get the success due to their lack of skills in the unsuitable profession. For instance
, Amitabh bachan
who is super star in Indian cinema got rejected in Suggestion
Bachan
radio jockey interview
as he is having Suggestion
a radio jockey interview
radio jockey interviews
loud
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a loud voice
voice
. Although
he learned speaking
soft dialogues in many institutes Suggestion
to speak
by
different teachers, he never succeeded. Later, he got the fame with his Suggestion
with
extrordinary
looks in films.
In conclusion, beyond what is ordinary or usual; highly unusual or exceptional or remarkable
extraordinary
extraordinarily
talent
is a god gift which no one can learn it by reaching out to trainers or professors by paying thousands of dollors
which is of no use. But there are the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
few exceptions
who have reached their milestones in proving Suggestion
a few exceptions
this
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and they are successful in their profession. It all depends on the persons confidence and having a circular shape
round
dedication but
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dedication, but
majaority
of the Suggestion
the majority
majority
talent
is given by god
which is got by birth.the supernatural being conceived as the perfect and omnipotent and omniscient originator and ruler of the universe; the object of worship in monotheistic religions
God
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