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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter - Explain why you changed job - Describe your new job - Tell him/her your other news

#work #company #english #friend #job #news
It’s
 been ages
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 since I’ve heard from you. Hope you are doing good and cherishing your life. Guess what?; I quit that pressurised job which you never ever want me to do, as it was an obstacle between both of us. Let me start with my extreme dissatisfaction with working hours due to which I was not able to keep in touch with you guys. As you know, I have not only remained anxious even after office hours, but my pocket was compromising a lot. Oh yes! How can I forget about my obnoxious boss & his arrogant behaviour, which made me feel, it is not my cup of tea anymore. Anyway, My current job which is
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 the same field
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 doesn’t only offer me flexible working hours but it offers
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 perks.
It’s
 challenging yet rewarding & one more thing,
it’s
 walking distance from my beautiful home. Now
it’s
 time for the surprise! I’m head over the heel to tell you that I’m getting hitched!
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 of course with the beautiful girl, my childhood love, Jennifer, and you have to attend my wedding for sure as there’s a grand celebration followed by rituals. Hey buddy, please save the date for us.
It’s
 21st Feb 2020 and make sure you come early, at least before a week as I’ve already booked a room from 17th to 22nd Feb 2020 for you my dear friend. See you soon man! Eagerly waiting to meet you. Yours
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 favourite Jim

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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