Some people believe bicycle has lot of advantages whereas others believe bicycle has more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Bicycle
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The bicycle
is one of the important inventions among commuting system in terms of human civilization. It is kind of a really old invention. Different people have different opinion about
cycle
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cycles
the cycle
. Some section says it has a variety of leverage and some says it have different detriments
.
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In the essay I am going to discourse about both the aspects and provide my perception. Cycling is so much cheaper than other modes of commuting since it doe not require any costly fuel. And for visiting nearby places like local markets, gyms and schools, it is the best way as it does not create any kind of pollution. Apart from
this
using bike can
also
help us to stay fit since it needs physical strength to ride a bicycle.
Hence according
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Hence, according
to
me
of me or myself
my
two-wheeler a kind of gift to humans. When we compare two-wheeler from other modes of commuting, on that
casedefinitely
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case definitely
it is very slow. And in today fast phase of lifestyle, it may not be able to fulfil all requirements of quick result.
For example
, we cannot use
bicycle
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the bicycle
for visiting countries.
Also
travelling in tandem is not that comfortable as we are in the car.
On the other hand
it is a little discomfort to use cycle for uneven path. In
this
way
this
particular
mode
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model
has certain disadvantages for sure. According to me despite of having some problems from
bike
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the bike
, it is extremely useful for humankind.
For instance
, I personally prefer using spin for my daily short travel to nearby places because it solves both the purpose
first
of saving money and maintaining a healthy lifestyle. It helps me to stay fit and active. In fact, in the high need of saving our planet we should consider cycling more often to avoid pollution as much as possible. We should encourage children to use two-wheeler.

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