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what are the advantages and disadvantages of having a pet

#pet
As
pet
Suggestion
a pet
- keeping is a fashionable habit nowadays, advantages and disadvantages of having a
pet
 are a very discussed topic. In
this
 opinion essay I intend to examine the advantages and disadvantages of having pets.
To begin
 with, there is a big advantages related to health in human owner. Having pets can help people who
arre
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
 suffering from a depression to reduce their illnesses. I think that it is something related to receiving some kind of love provided by the animal which encourage that person to be happier. As a disadvantage, it is a public knowledge that
pet
-keeping involves spending a lot of money not only on food but
also
 on health care.
However
, keeping an animal is not as expensive as forming a family, so many people decide to adopt a
pet
 before expanding their family.
Last
 but not least, having a
pet
 is
also
 a commitment
with
Suggestion
to
 the animal.
For example
, if you have a dog, you should walk it at least three times a day. On balance, I think having a
pet
 is not a decision people can make without
analizing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 pros and cons.
Furthermore
, they must be really
awared
(sometimes followed by 'of') having or showing knowledge or understanding or realization or perception
aware
 of the importance of having one.

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