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you have an account with a bank. you recently notices that the bank has taken extra money out of your account and you are not sure why. Write a letter to the manager of the bank. in the letter: 1. describe the details of your account 2. explain the problem with your account 3. suggest, what you think the manager should do

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sandesh and I am writing
this
 letter to bring to your notice that an extra sum of money has been withdrawn from my bank tale on 02/22/2020 and the reason being unknown to me.
Firstly
, I am a US bank customer for
past
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the past
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 4 years with an active Checking explanation.
This
 issue has
been never occurred
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never occurred
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 to me before. My story number is 1234567890 and Routing number 6543217.
Secondly
, in
the
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apply
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recent
days
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 I have been noticing an issue in which whenever I withdraw any amount from the nearest ATM, am not getting any notification nor the report does not get updated on time. It’s almost taking 1-2 business days to get updated and
hence
 I lose a track of my transactions.
This
 time a sum of 250$ has been withdrawn, which is a huge amount and
hence
 I was able to notice the difference. So could you please consider
this
 as a top priority and look into the issue and let me know on what basis the amount was withdrawn and if corrected could you please refund it back to my version at the earliest. Thank you
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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