you have an account with a bank. you recently notices that the bank has taken extra money out of your account and you are not sure why. Write a letter to the manager of the bank. in the letter: 1. describe the details of your account 2. explain the problem with your account 3. suggest, what you think the manager should do

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sandesh and I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice that an extra sum of money has been withdrawn from my bank tale on 02/22/2020 and the reason being unknown to me.

Firstly

, I am a US bank customer for

past

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the past

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4 years with an active Checking explanation.

This

issue has

been never occurred

Change to the active voice

never occurred

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to me before. My story number is 1234567890 and Routing number 6543217.

Secondly

, in

the

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apply

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recent

days

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,days

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I have been noticing an issue in which whenever I withdraw any amount from the nearest ATM, am not getting any notification nor the report does not get updated on time. It’s almost taking 1-2 business days to get updated and

hence

I lose a track of my transactions.

This

time a sum of 250$ has been withdrawn, which is a huge amount and

hence

I was able to notice the difference. So could you please consider

this

as a top priority and look into the issue and let me know on what basis the amount was withdrawn and if corrected could you please refund it back to my version at the earliest. Thank you

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

193 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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