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With the help of internet and television many people are becoming famous. Is this a positive or negative trend? Include examples.

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Internet
Suggestion
The internet
 is an instant
accey
 to mine of information.
Where as
Suggestion
Whereas
 television work for entertaining people. Apart from all, they are now working to boost people who are willing to become popular. In
this
 essay, I will discuss about
benefits
Suggestion
the benefits
 and drawbacks of
Internet
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the Internet
 and television.
To begin
 with,
telant
natural abilities or qualities
talent
 is getting recognized. Television
are providing
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is providing
 platform for children and adults to present their talent by providing them platform to encourage them.
Additionally
,
internet
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the internet
 is easily accessible by everyone which works as noon for talented flocks. To exemplify, Americans got talent is a well recognized platform to embrace success.
Moreover
, people get well paid off for their talent in terms of revenues by many websites and reality programmes.
Also some
Accept comma addition
Also, some
 fitness
freck
a person or animal that is markedly unusual or deformed
freak
 videos and healthy diet food are
also
 trending, as people are becoming more cautious about health. On the darker side, getting famous can be deleterious. People may become egoistic and stubborn. To cite an example, internet sensation Ranu Mondal who was singing on railway stations became celebrity overnight but,
this
 changed her personality.
In addition
, multitude can indulge themselves in deleterious activities to embrace success by many frauds. To recapitulate,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 and televisions have now totally changes the scenario as compared to
past
Suggestion
the past
.
Although
 they have eased our lives by providing
chance
Suggestion
chances
 to get
game
Suggestion
a game
the game
 but, there are side effects
too
in the direction of
to
 which outweighs the benefits.

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