The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
The pictures illustrate a number of important changes which took place in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam. From the maps,
it is clear that
the most noticeable change that occurred in the town was that of a huge lake.
Additionally
, the forest and farmlands had completely disappeared by 2010. In 1990, there was an ancient structure and a forest with rare flora and fauna to the west of the river, and irrigated farmlands to the east.
However
, with the construction of a dam wall, those features disappeared beneath a large lake, which
also
became a fishing area in 2010. Looking at the maps in more detail,
while
the mountains still existed, the villages in the far east were relocated
further
south of the mountains, and a large hotel was built in their place. Meanwhile, a hydroelectric power dam was constructed with a wide range of electricity pylons appearing nearby.
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