Some people feel that entertainers( e.g. film stars,pop musicians or sports star) are paid too much money. Do u agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer with relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Entertainment industry

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The entertainment industry

is the one

that is

often surrounded by controversies and the

money

they

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

for their work is

highly debatable topic

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a highly debatable topic

. Personally,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that they do get highly paid in comparison to the other professions that should be considered more in the monetary aspect if seen from the side of the

hardwork

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hard work

done or the contribution made for the society as

whole

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a whole

.

Firstly

, the exorbitant

money

they

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

for the amount of work they do is unjustifiable.

For instance

, the unbeatable success of the movie "Big-5" added 40

crore

to the bank account of famous actress Shrita.

This

huge amount assigned for their

hardwork work

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hard work

hard work work

in single movie is something that cannot defend the 3 year salary of the doctor life who might have done 1000s of surgery during that span.

Secondly

, if seen from the perspective of the contribution a profession make to the society, the entertainment field is not the top notch. They do have a great role in providing entertainment and relief to the people during

stress but

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stress, but

they do lack behind when the ingenuity of the scientist and other professions for the betterment of people are considered. Futhermore, the army cadets who are working selflessly on the borders away from their families risking their lives to safeguard us from the cross country threats, are paid in several thousands for

month

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the month

.

This

scenario is not appreciable. The situations, they and their families face cannot be emphasised.

These along

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These, along

with the jobs of traffic policemen, scientists,

etcetra

are several other professions that need to be highly paid for their undivided attention and the lives they risk for the betterment of

whole nation

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the whole nation

whole nations

.

This

money

atleast

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at least

can free them from the worries they carry for the future of their families. To conclude,

inspite

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in spite

of paying an exorbitant

money

to the ones in the entertainment field for completing or performing a single task, an

applaudable

amount of

money

should be secured in the bank accounts of

ones

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the ones

who are risking their lives and working selflessly for the betterment of all.