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these days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.

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Many people prefer living in the city, so they are in the tendency of
abandon
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abandoning
 their distinct
towm
an urban area with a fixed boundary that is smaller than a city
town
 or
village
, nowadays.
This
 essay is going to discuss
this
 chosen and its impact on the society. The city life is more attractive than rural area living.
Thus
, many people move in order to live comfortably in the cities. Actually,
this
 situation has advantages and disadvantages in both.
ALthough
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Although
, it seems more relaxing for the residents, for the
soc
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Soc
,
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,
ety
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the eye
eye
 can be harmful lead to less production, organic food.
This
 is because people who start to stay in
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 do not manufacture, most of them do not work in land, vice versa in white collar business.
For example
, in 1970s, Turkey's
village
 population has decreased
sharplyand
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sharply and
 the
sociey
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
 structure has
change
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changed
 irreversibly. The difference between the people who was born in the city and small town was remarkable, and so impacted culture in a bad way.
On the other hand
, it believed rural life has own advantages. Some people
has moved
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have moved
 back when they retired. As on solution, the government has encouraged to
toung
change orientation or direction, also in the abstract sense
turn
tune
peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
peoples
 to
live
go away from a place
leave
 their
village
. It can be a good example, The municipality of Süksün where in my country had an announcement to return youth with a good job opportunity. After
this
, many
resident
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residents
 who was born in the
village
 had been returned
with
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to
 their family and kicked off living in there during with generations. In conclusion, I restate that urban life has
attractive
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attracted
,
however there
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however, there
 has been some
challange
take exception to
challenge
. Due to the governments should be
protect
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protected
 in the
balanca
a state of equilibrium
balance
 population in rural and urban areas.

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