some jobs are based at a single work place where the hours are the same each day, while other jobs involve frequent travel and irregular working hours. Discuss the advantages of both types of job and give your own opinion about which one is best.

These
days many
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days, many
employee
travel
Suggestion
travels
frequently their
job
work
irregular hour all
day
sometime all night you get a lot of
money
your
job but
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job, but
every
day
is
work
hard all
day
sometime all night you have
feel
Suggestion
felt
stres
the relative prominence of a syllable or musical note (especially with regard to stress or pitch)
stress
you cannot
realax
become less tense, rest, or take one's ease
relax
yourself. other jobs are single
work
place
hour same each
day
you have a good
job
same
money
alway is good your stres can be save but you do one thing one
place
every days so you boring and you want find differant ways you some special sometime you want variety days but never have
this
true many people my country always same so you have to get use The advantage soem
job
is that close to home no train no bus no car to
work
you just nex door so you can
work
quikly and be your every
day
work
this
is good for you have more
money
you can have good pay can be good your family and good your future irregular hour mean you feel tire all
day
you can have no comfortable your
life
But advantage that travel often see world alway new
place
new experience you can know different culture and learn different knowledges not possible past like my grandfather necer go
place
in airplan now you can go tomorrow you want you go is new things and it is very interest your
life
. You have
job earn
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job, earn
much
money
you can employee travel many
place
Suggestion
places
and
work
iregular
contrary to rule or accepted order or general practice
irregular
regular
hours have many advantage your
life
you can single
work
place
this
is same time start each
day
same time finish you know your
life
and you know how happen
next
every
days
Suggestion
day
and for me
this
most important things.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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