The advent of the internet has made it it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal experiences In your essay.

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Advanced technology makes it possible that people can work from home and they do not need to travel on a daily basis. I think
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trend leads to more benefits than drawbacks. In
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essay I intend to delve both advantages and disadvantages in the following paragraphs. The main advantage is people do not need to use, transport, at work and it leads to many positive results.
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, traffic congestion will be less and automatically noise pollution and exhaust fumes will not rise,
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, It helps to save our environment.
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, nowadays both parents do the job and they have to go at work. That's why they are unable to spend time with their kids. If people do task from home with the help of the internet they can spend their quality of time with his family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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