In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There are more and more parents who would like to teach their children at

home

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rather than letting them

learning

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learn

at schools in some states. I think these parents' views are unreasonable and its disadvantages outweigh the advantages, because

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, schools have more professional learning resources than

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and

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, pupils obtain the unique group experiences at

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the schools

. The education departments and agencies control the largest amount of education resources than single family.

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Kindergartens

, schools and collages own a lot of teaching materials, instructing aids, professional teachers and considerate libraries for students. Meanwhile, the governments invest a large

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amount

of money to each school in order to continue improving teaching and learning efficiency of them. Kids will be difficult to access these benefits if parents do not send them to

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school

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, in Shanghai, each primary school is funded by the local authority nearly one million pound to develop their teachers' group and teaching devices, which is impossible to be achieved in any pupil's

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.

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, students can acquire the experiences of collective lives. Some people might argue that teaching children at

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home which

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home, which

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a one-to-one model

the one-to-one model

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will be more effective for learners to get a better grade in

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the exam

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, examination is not the only goal of the education. Understanding how to cooperate with others and communication skills in the same age groups are

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essential

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each child.

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, except for lessons, there are many activities and workshops organised in schools. Pupils could understand a lot of rules to cooperate with others and the communication strategies to make others feeling comfortable. These experiences can only be acquired at schools. In conclusion, I believe its disadvantages overweigh the benefits that teaching children at

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rather than sending them to

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school

, because children cannot access many professional instructing resources and get collective experiences.